Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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that it would be a good idea for

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together with their partner. If you can notice more of them have no knowledge of being

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work before they are planning to build a family. If you start teaching them at

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age they can open their mind and think more good in their

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if they are in that stage they can continue learning by themselves. Being a good

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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