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The value of a particular
country
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’s exports in various categories in two years (2015 and 2016) is demonstrated in the chart below. The
percentage
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 changes of each category compared to the previous year are
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 calculated and shown in a separated table. As it can be seen, the
country
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’s
export
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 in all categories except in the case of gems and jewellers rose up in 2016. According to the diagram, petroleum products, as well as engineered goods, provide the most of
export
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’s earnings for the
country
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.
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, they had not a remarkable growth in 2016, the highest rise in
export
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 in
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country
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 belongs to textiles by 15.24
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percentage
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 more which added about 5 billion $ to the
country
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’s
export
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 income. Engineered goods with 8.5
percentage
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 growth fall after it. The
country
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 experienced little more
export
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 in petroleum products and agricultural commodities in comparison to 2015 too. The number of gems and jewellers’
export
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 had a fall of 5.18
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 in 2016. It means that the
country
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 had approximately 43 billion $ from the
export
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 of precious stones and gold in 2015, and it reduced to around 41 billion $ in the
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 year.
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