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The table describes the details about the international
students
 who were being studied in two foreign nations which are
Canada
 and the USA in two different periods 2002 and 2003. Overall, the US country had
the
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 higher level of overseas pupils as compared to
Canada
. According to the graph illustrates, in 2002,
in
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Canada
 had the more overseas
students
 from China at 5,400 and that ratio was increased by 45% in the
next
 year in
Canada
,
in contrast
, in 2002, China
students
 had 110000 in America but one year later,
this
 proportion was risen by 6%.
Students
 from India in 2002, studied in the USA at 200000,
on the contrary
,
this
 ratio was reduced by 9%, meanwhile in
Canada
 had India
students
 at 2100 in 2000,
conversely
,
students
 ratio was raised by 35% in 2003. In terms of
Canada
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students
 were studied in the US rate at 31000 and
this
 was increased by 7% in 2003.
Similarly
,
students
 were from America in
Canada
 at 5000 in 2002, one year later, that proportion was increased by 9%.
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