In most countries, young people form a large proportion of those who are unemployed.  Why this is the case, and what can be done to solve the problem?

A lack of careers for young
people
in most
countries
lead to those are became a big part of
jobless
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population in their regions.
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to peer that. Increasing the level of higher education among young
people
can be a reason for
this
.
For example
, someone who has graduated from a field which there are not highly jobs for that in their
country
, like studying in masters of degree in forestry in a
country
with few forests.
Therefore
, it is possible that the person will be unemployed. To solve
this
problem, it is necessary to expand the fields in universities that are appropriate to the
country
's weather conditions.
For example
, it is good to promote agriculture in
country
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a country
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that is
very rainy. Because it is both useful for the region and there is a lot of work for them related to their field to study. Another
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cause
for the growing population of the unemployed
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almost all of
them
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are young is that there are not enough economic resources in their
country
such
as oil, gas, gold and similar items. In some
countries
,
although
there is a wide range of specialists and engineers in various fields, there is not much
production
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and they are mostly consumers.
This
again leads to unemployment because
people
can not find a job that suits their skills.one way to solve
this
problem is to encourage young
people
to do other things like online business. They can
also
take online courses and teach whatever they are good at to
people
in other areas who need that expertise or do any other work that they can earn money and live. In conclusion,
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article reflects on the problems of young jobless
people
who
are became
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a large part of some
countries
and examines solutions to solve them.And
also
stated, the main reasons for rising youth unemployment in some
countries
are lack of economic resources or inadequate education that all
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can be solved by the provided solutions.
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