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Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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In
this
 day and age , the tie bond between families have been loosened and rather than past times and children do not tend to spend much of their time talking to their
parents
 . In
this
 essay , I will look at the advantages and disadvantages associated with
this
 subject and draw a conclusion .
Firstly
, the only advantage is that with the advancement of technology more and more people want to work aside from gender .
As a result
 , they rarely can set aside time for visiting their
parents
 .Take working
parents
 as an example , they dedicate the whole of the day to the work and sometimes are tired of the burden of the work .
Therefore
, they may suffer from anxiety and stress and do not want their
parents
 noticing it . So it may be a good way to separate their privacy . Turning to the other side of the argument,
this
 is a bad habit for every individual and they may suffer a lot after they lost their loved ones as Time passes by so quickly .
For instance
 , on some occasion may one of a member of the family is old or suffer from a disease and no one considers paying a visit and being informed about her or him and they only understand when it is too late. In my point of vides. There are no advantages regarding
this
 issue and family are everything because they brought up and nurtured us and we were nothing without them . In conclusion.
Although
,
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the workload is significantly increased ,
this
 should not be a barrier for children and we need to take into consideration that having a good relationship with close members of the family can change our bad mood and lessen the stress.
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