In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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In recent times, it has been noticed that
people
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tend to be distant
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their neighbours as compared to the close proximity shared in the past. In
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trend and suggest possible solutions. In my opinion, Life today is much more
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, than
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it used to be in the past.
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, in urban ,cities individuals are driven by monetary gains rather than emotional connect.
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,
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are hesitant in lending a helping hand to others unless they can capitalize from the help provided.
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, Another factor to be considered
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is the rise of nucleus communities as opposed to
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society of the past.One solution
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can be
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arranging certain programs or celebrating festivals within the community.
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, the
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residing in the community will get to know each other better, creating a sense of bonhomie. Another reason, for the lack of relationship building with
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is the advent of
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. The
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on
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as the internet,
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, and other social media platforms has resulted in a decline in the emotional bonding of humans.
People
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prefer to make friends in the virtual world rather than make an effort to connect personally with
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close to them. One example of tackling
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issue
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is having a stipulated time for completely disconnecting from
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and engaging in outdoor activities
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as
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playing in the park or chatting with your neighbour.
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, communication among the
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living in close proximity will be established. In conclusion,
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and societal changes have impacted the kind of
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that is
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nurtured among neighbours and
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.
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, it is upon individuals to make an effort to take cognizance of the
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living around them and build relations.
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