In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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In recent times, it has been noticed that

people

tend to be distant

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their neighbours as compared to the close proximity shared in the past. In

this

essay, I will explore the reason for

this

trend and suggest possible solutions. In my opinion, Life today is much more

fast paced

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, than

what

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it used to be in the past.

Furthermore

, in urban ,cities individuals are driven by monetary gains rather than emotional connect.

for instance

people

are hesitant in lending a helping hand to others unless they can capitalize from the help provided.

Moreover

, Another factor to be considered

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is the rise of nucleus communities as opposed to

close knit

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society of the past.One solution

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can be

people

arranging certain programs or celebrating festivals within the community.

As a result

, the

people

residing in the community will get to know each other better, creating a sense of bonhomie. Another reason, for the lack of relationship building with

neighbours

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is the advent of

technology

. The

over reliance

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technology

such

as the internet,

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, and other social media platforms has resulted in a decline in the emotional bonding of humans.

People

prefer to make friends in the virtual world rather than make an effort to connect personally with

people

close to them. One example of tackling

this

issue

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is having a stipulated time for completely disconnecting from

technology

and engaging in outdoor activities

such

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playing in the park or chatting with your neighbour.

Hence

, communication among the

people

living in close proximity will be established. In conclusion,

Technology

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technology

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and societal changes have impacted the kind of

relation

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that is

nurtured among neighbours and

people

However

, it is upon individuals to make an effort to take cognizance of the

people

living around them and build relations.

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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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