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Being celebrities such as famous sports person or celebrities bring problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Undoubtedly, being famous can be challenging in some ways. They have to be conservative in public places. Whether the question is does the benefits of being
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 overcomes the problems. I personally believe that positive points of being
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famous
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 more that troubles. On the one hand, privacy is an essential factor for everybodys' life. Being well known in a society can be difficult sometimes, feeling that you are always in the
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spotlight
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spot light
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spotlight
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 and have no private life.
Paparzzies
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Paparazzi
 are an obvious example, which makes celebrities feel uncomfortable. Photographers
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 and journalists use every opportunity to find out
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exciting
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exiting
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exciting
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 news about famous peoples'
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life
lives
lifes
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lives
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.
That is
 why celebrities prefer to be
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anomalous
 in
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public places, wearing
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a hat
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hat
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hats
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, and glasses stressfully.
On the other hand
,
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privileges
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the privilages
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 of being a famous person are countless.
Firstly
, due to the fame of a
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,celebrity
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 many good
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 can
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be fulfilled
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fulfill
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 in
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society. Collecting
donation
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donations
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 for poor people which can
leads
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 to helping poor people is one example.
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