Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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It is argued by certain
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that the biggest environmental challenge we currently face is the extinction of particular
animals
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and
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while others believe we have more pressing issues than these. Personally, I believe that the latter is true since it presents with more grave effects.
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in
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essay, I will tackle both these views and give a conclusion.
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with, some
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believe that the extinction of certain
plants
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and
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is a major environmental problem because ,without these, there would be less
oxygen
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production in the environment. Take,
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, some
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are known to contribute to the earth's atmosphere more than 60 per cent of
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gas than any other,
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if they vanished from the environment,
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the earth would be deprived of its main source of
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.
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in itself emphasises the magnitude of the problem that extinction comes with and why
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a matter can not be trivialised. Despite
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being the case, I still hold out that
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is not the main matter of concern among the present environmental problems.
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, certain
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feel that the major environmental problem is not the
loss
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of certain
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and
plants
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species because even with these species present,
air
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pollution
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from many industries has led to heavy rainfalls or droughts that have impacted more lives than can
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and
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. To put
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in perspective, unlike the minute impact from the
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of certain
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and
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,
air
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pollution
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resulting from heavy industries has led to an increase in the frequency and magnitude of hurricanes around the globe with huge
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of lives and property.
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, many countries in Europe today are faced with heavy downpours and the resulting hurricane Ana that all stems from environmental
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pollution
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and greenhouse gases emissions. In conclusion, it is true that even though certain
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and
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play a vital role in the ecosystem balance and that the
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of certain species can result in reduced
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gas production,
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can not compare with the impact that hurricanes have on
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in general. I
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still believe that
air
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pollution
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is the biggest environmental challenge at the moment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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