some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.
Some
people
think that it is good to share as much information
as possible in scientific research, corporation and the academic industry. Others believe that some knowledge is too critical or too useful to let everyone knows it. I will discuss both statements and give my own opinion.
Firstly
, nowadays, internet
technology is rapid development and people
can gain numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
information
from websites and social media. However
, some of these
Change the determiner
this information
information
and news may be inaccurate that results mislead
or misguiding. Change preposition
in mislead
Thus
, scientists, businessmen and academic industries have the responsibility to share the correct information
that let citizens know the truth. For example
, at the time of the breakout of epidemic Covid-19, an amount of news and messages were circulated on the internet
including various messages that people
didn’t know whether was true. This
caused many people
were getting panic. Meanwhile, the population needed authentic information
to calm the emotion, and be aware of how to solve many problems in this
situation.Thus
, expert advice are
significantly important in Change the verb form
is
this
situation.
Secondly
, today, the exposure of scientific information
might cause some crimes that police or government couldn’t prevent. The evolve
of the Change the form of the verb
evolving
internet
made number
of conveniences and benefits, Change the article
a number
the number
nevertheless
, if people
can learn everything such
as drug or chemistry information
, some criminals will happen. For instance
, some young people
might attempt to learn how to make drugs or weapons from the internet
community, furthermore
, doing the illegal trade to get money. Thus
, in this
case, the content of scientific information
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
released
on the Add a missing verb
is released
internet
should be strict administrate.
In my opinion, I think in some urgent situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
such
as epidemic
or wars, the scientist, business and academic advice are extremely important that give Fix the agreement mistake
epidemics
people
wisdom knowledge. By contrast
, the release of scientific information
should have control of the contents, because it might cause youth crimes.
To sum up, I agree with scientific research, corporation and academic-industry should share the information
but should be limited and administrated in serval situations.Submitted by littlekongmy on
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