some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

Some
people
think that it is good to share as much
information
as possible in scientific research, corporation and the academic industry. Others believe that some knowledge is too critical or too useful to let everyone knows it. I will discuss both statements and give my own opinion.
Firstly
, nowadays,
internet
technology is rapid development and
people
can gain
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of
information
from websites and social media.
However
, some of
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information
and news may be inaccurate that results
mislead
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or misguiding.
Thus
, scientists, businessmen and academic industries have the responsibility to share the correct
information
that let citizens know the truth.
For example
, at the time of the breakout of epidemic Covid-19, an amount of news and messages were circulated on the
internet
including various messages that
people
didn’t know whether was true.
This
caused many
people
were getting panic. Meanwhile, the population needed authentic
information
to calm the emotion, and be aware of how to solve many problems in
this
situation.
Thus
, expert advice
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significantly important in
this
situation.
Secondly
, today, the exposure of scientific
information
might cause some crimes that police or government couldn’t prevent. The
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of the
internet
made
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of conveniences and benefits,
nevertheless
, if
people
can learn everything
such
as drug or chemistry
information
, some criminals will happen.
For instance
, some young
people
might attempt to learn how to make drugs or weapons from the
internet
community,
furthermore
, doing the illegal trade to get money.
Thus
, in
this
case, the content of scientific
information
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released
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on the
internet
should be strict administrate. In my opinion, I think in some urgent
situation
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such
as
epidemic
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or wars, the scientist, business and academic advice are extremely important that give
people
wisdom knowledge.
By contrast
, the release of scientific
information
should have control of the contents, because it might cause youth crimes. To sum up, I agree with scientific research, corporation and academic-industry should share the
information
but should be limited and administrated in serval situations.
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