More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?
The standard of most people is drinking which is
sugar
. Because a lot
of cafes
and bubble
tea
are very interested. Hence
, the government
should be concerned about the health of the population so give knowledge about the drawbacks of drinking a lot
of sugar
and having an exercise
campaign .I will explain this
issue in this
essay.
Now, cafes
and bubble
tea
are very popular and there are increased dramatical of open around the world.Thus
, everyone
can buy it which is very easy. A good case in this
point, in ,Thailand has a lot
of cafes
and bubble
tea
are still open and popular so everyone
can eat every time when they want to drink
it and have delivery which can order it all the time. However
, when they drink
almost every day become to addict sugar
and when they don't drink
it.They always feel sleepy all day so they would like to drink
sugar
for helping fresh ,especially the worker who is working hard.
In this
issue, the government
need to give the advantage of sugar
and convince the people to exercise
rather than drink
water sugar
. For example
, the government
create an infographic for the disadvantages of obesity for everyone
easy understand and has a campaign such
as when you drink
sugar
you have to exercise
for your life.
In conclusion, most people are into sugar
because have a lot
of cafes
and bubble
tea
and are still popular with everyone
so the government
have to be concerned about this
problem.Hence
, have a campaign for helping the population understand the disadvantages of sugar
and convince everyone
to exercise
for life.Submitted by suchaya211 on
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