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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays modern communication usually they are not writing letters already. Modern technologies are more easy and fast. Most of the work or companies now are using the computer. All requests or reports are sent thru email.
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 is more accessible to all especially if you will make a letter and you need to send it to the three managers. So you only need is to make an email and sent it to them at the same
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. Making your daily report for your company and many more, your saving
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 and efforts. Using
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 you can reply as soon as possible, especially if you want an urgent response from someone.
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 modern communication is better. Very helpful in many companies, schools and other establishments. Whatever problem they can easily communicate to the nearest one who can just one click you can communicate to solve. Even in your Families and friends who are far to each other can reach easily and it`s like they are with
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 you. Compare to the old days, you need to send the letter to the postman and it takes a long
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 to receive a response to your letter and sometimes no response at all. Before many letters delay and worst of
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 is lost. Because sending letters in the old-
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 are passing in a different place so the tendency will be lost or misplaced. In conclusion,
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modern communication is more effective than in the old
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. In our communities using the technologies is faster and making our life easy, compare before.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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