"Write a letter to your neighbour to ask him/her to take care of your house while you are away for a week on holiday. Please say •Explain where you are going and why. • What do you need him/her to do? • What should he/she do in case of emergency?"

#neighbour #care #house #week #holiday #•explain #case #emergency

Dear Ms Palu Hi, I'm Hinako. I have something to ask you. Actually, I have a plan to go away because I have to visit America in terms of my work. So that while, I ask you to take care of my house. There aren't so many things to do, but please do not forget the date, every Monday, when the trash is corrected. If you missed the date, you are not able to dispose of some garbage by

Monday.

Also

, I have a pup, which is so pretty. I want you to take care of it carefully. There is what you should do for the pup.

First

, you have to take him a walk for 20 minutes around near the park, and give some puppy food to him every 3 hours.

Moreover

, when the toilet of it becomes dirty, please replace it with the new one. In case of emergency, please call me soon. If I was busy, I would not be able to respond to you at that time. But I'll call back you as soon as possible. There are so many things you should do for a while, I'm sorry for the inconvenience. If you have a question, don't hesitate to ask me. Please call me quickly. I'll buy you some souvenirs. See you! Hinako

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