Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Dhruvi, I trust you are doing well and excited to learn the sport that I have mentioned below, as per our
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conversation. I know that you love driving cars and enjoy driving them in extreme conditions.
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, I would say that you should start learning the car racing. And I know that you already have many skills that a
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needs to start learning the sport.
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, I think that you should start by joining our local go-karting club which is close to the City Park.
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will not only help you to get started but
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will help you understand the sport at
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early stage.
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but not least, don't get too excited
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what have mentioned
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, but I think that I might have some leisure time during the weekends which I am willing
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to do something new so I might join you. I wish you all the best and cheer you for all the success in racing. Yours lovingly, RP
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task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples and details about how to learn car racing, such as mentioning initial steps, potential challenges, or resources available.
coherence cohesion
Organize your points with more defined paragraphs to enhance clarity and flow. Consider separating ideas about your friend's suitability, learning methods, and your potential involvement.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are clear, creating a friendly and encouraging tone in the email.
task achievement
The task is well understood and mostly answered effectively by recommending a specific sport and suggesting a way to learn it together.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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