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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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There are different genres of
music
 around the world and many people like their own country
music
.Do we need
music
?In my ,opinion
music
 is an integral part of society and it is based on personal preferences.I will expound my viewpoint in the following paragraphs. Nowadays,there are many different kinds of
music
 on which society loves to groove.
Furthermore
,it helps many
crowd
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 in stress relief,a way to bring back older memories and help to maintain anxiety level.
Moreover
,it
also
 helps children to learn languages in school with the help of
music
.It
also
 helps many
community
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 to get out of depression,
for example
,by listening to
music
 one is able to feel refreshed and physically healthier. many countries are still trying to promote
traditional
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the traditional
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 soul of their own regions because
young
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the young
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 generation are attracted more towards the international
music
 and many schools try to teach their pupils values of the traditional
music
 to keep their culture preserved for a longer time.With regard to
this
,it should not be forced to learn traditional
music
 but try to tell the importance of
this
 kind of
music
,
for instance
,by learning classical
music
 one can increase their learning power and IQ level. In conclusion ,
music
 is important in different aspects of life and should try to protect our traditional
music
 so that the upcoming generation should learn about it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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