Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays there is much controversy over the most responsible role-player of fostering precious members of society. Some people are suggesting that

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issue while others argue that teachers are causing integral effects.

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it is noteworthy to bear in mind that both parties are playing significant roles in nurturing youngsters, I believe that schools can guide children better to become valuable humans. I will discuss reasons for each view which will be proceeding by my belief. On one hand, the role that our families play in shaping our personalities is out of the question.

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their influence on us is

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, it is reasonable for them to be expected to do their best in nurturing their

offsprings

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to make a better future civilization.

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, it has been proven that toddlers'

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activities are derivative of what they are watching at

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.

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,

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as the most considerable effective people in their children's lives should not only teach them the means of becoming civil society members but

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watch carefully their own behaviours because undirectly they are

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generation's guiding lights.

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, a great number of successful people have been and still are being graduated from

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. The educational materials have been

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day by day which all are conductive subjects to move toward a humanitarian civilization.

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, the

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is an

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era that experts are still researching to establish

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for acting good in it.

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, social media is

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novel issue for the older generation and

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behaving

good

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that platform still is unclear for

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to teach.

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,

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can not foster

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generation that

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they would be able to in the past if it were not for the fast developments. To sum up, either families

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teachers are playing increasingly important roles in educating young adults. Family members as the very

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humans that we face are our role models during our childhood and teachers as the educated guidance have always done their best to convey

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accurate and correct information. I believe that to behave better in

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new era we need to be well-trained

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evidence-based guidelines at schools.