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The
map
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 shows the details about the alteration to a
park
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 in 1980 and the present day. Looking from an overall perspective, the
park
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 has become developed gradually with numerous recreational amenities
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 as the playground, sitting and the outdoor eating place. According to the
map
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 illustrates, In 1980, the
park
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 had a minimum facility. The bottom of the
park
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 had an entrance gate,
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 to the northwest side had another entrance gate for visitors, these both gates have been eliminated and four ways road has been built. To the northeast of the
map
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 had trees, but now trees space has been substracted and additional facilities have been installed like sitting chairs, desks and barbecue. In terms of the pond only has remained at
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park
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 as compared to the past, but one extra bench has been added at present. To the southwest had flowers to make way for the bunch of wild bushes. The flowers of the southwest of the
map
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 have been replaced by the playground.
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