Some companies sponsor sports to advertise themselves. Some people say it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports

have never been more popular than today it is growing even more by expanding television coverage to different kinds of games. Airing

sports

on television is an immense opportunity for companies to advertise themselves by sponsoring

sports

, but some people think

this

may have a few disadvantages, while others think it is a good practice. In

this

essay, I will shed light on both, the advantages and the disadvantages of

this

practice.

To begin

, I will state a few plus points of sponsoring

sports

. It is not always possible to fund tournaments and events held for games,

however

this

is when firms invest in games in exchange for branding by the telecasting of the tournament.

This

helps both by providing assets to the league and branding to the firms. whereas it is not that investing does not have negative sides, it is very expensive to buy the telecasting rights for marketing, it does not guarantee profitable results and brands may

also

face huge losses in some events. Even more, people face issues,

such

as being repeatedly viewed ads that can be frustrating after a limit. To conclude, I think sponsoring

sports

for advertising is a good practice, the negative face of

this

does not overweigh the positive. People get exposed to more goods in the market which may be useful to them,

then

or later.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
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