Some people say that it is better for children to grow up in a city, while others say that growing up in the countryside is better. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

It is argued that raising a

child

in urban areas benefits more than doing so in

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rural place. I agree that raising a

child

in the suburb is more beneficial which I will address my reasons in

this

essay. Rural areas are known to uphold the culture and tradition of

people

.

Therefore

, when a

child

is brought up there, those practices are inculcated in him which in

turns

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makes him

gainmastery

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gain mastery

over it, and equally passes it on to others as they advance in age. A typical example is when I visited

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cave in

south eastern

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Nigeria, the

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guide who told us the history and relevance of the cave to the

people

, said he learnt it from infancy. So, histories are told by

village

dwellers.

Furthermore

, rural communities

inhabiters

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have food on their tables. It is widely known that most

village

people

are farmers which are usually done by teenagers, they knew how to do it since they live in the suburb,

this

will

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give them the opportunity to survive if they are jobless and could

also

do it without sophisticated

equipments

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if the government fails to provide one for them. Moreso, the background of a

child

determines his

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. It is widely believed that

well mannered

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individuals are seen in the villages, because, there are a lot of aged

people

there and so norms and ethics are passed down to them which shapes their character.

For instance

, when a man is searching for a wife, he is normally

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adviced

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to go to the

village

to look for one. In conclusion,

village

dwellers maintain their tradition, does not starve and

also

behave acceptably, I

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therefore

prefer raising a

child

in the suburb than in the city.