Some people belief that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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It is always argued that some
people
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believe scientific and
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business
research should publish free as much as it's possible to benefit everyone, why some
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thought some information is too important to be shared freely.in fact, in my point of view, new information and
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should share freely with limitations.
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with, in today's modern world which
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can access
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unlimited sources with one click by Google or other websites it's necessary for them to use the newest and up-to-date
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in business and academic progress and many scientific subjects.
This
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can help
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to use new methods and knowledge in their personal life and business career.
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, a manager can read some books or articles which they were wroten from other managers experience in their own job and using their techniques and challenges can be helpful to upgrade managing skills or company improvements.
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,
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and companies
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their time and life
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doing
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on different subjects should be benefited from their job while publishing their data and result Freely
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can damage their research originality with copyrights.
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, it is a better idea to access all the information in
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subjects
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of subjects
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with limitations
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can benefit both researchers and users. Publishers
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to read or use a part of
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freely but if users want to read more on that subject should pay and download it completely.
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Apple company have some apps or software's which they are free to download but if you want to access all the facilities in that application you need to buy the premium one. In conclusion,
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should benefit from new
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in business, scientific or education as much as the person who
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data and
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it.
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