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The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase the tax on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem

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Some nations are concerned with the best method to solve
this
 problem.
Although
 certain folks pressure that tax increment is the most effective to tackle environmental dangers. I believe, that offering dumps for developments and making visas v more expensive, will prove more effective.
Firstly
, more taxation plays a significant role in limiting the number of trips by companies or individuals.
As a result
 of a high number of ,taxes people will reduce their trips to a limited amount.
For instance
, the high price to boost the tourism revenues in its country, Indonesia has up-grated its flight tickets price that includes basic prices and 20% tax to travel abroad after the pandemic COVID-19.
Secondly
, restricting Visa access is another key method to mitigate the increasing demand for flights.
This
 is to say that, people will think twice to take a plane because they would pay double the prices that are for flight tickets and taxes, as a consequence, they will prefer to enjoy their holiday locally rather than to fly overseas because of price considerations.
For example
, my neighbours decided to visit France a transit zone for a week.
However
, while applying for Visa they realized that there were needed a lot of documents, covid tests and money to get it.
Therefore
, they were not able to do
this
 and decided not to visit Europe. In conclusion, the government should include the tax in aircraft accommodation systems in order to reduce the amount of air pollution that could drive some drawbacks to our environmental systems
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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