Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.

Nowadays, teenagers are supported to do the

community

Use synonyms

work

Use synonyms

in their free time which is made some people think that youngsters should not get

wage

Add an article

a wage

show examples

from

this

Linking Words

kind of job. And

this

Linking Words

might be

benefits

Replace the word

beneficial

show examples

for them. From my judging, I believe that people should get paid whatever the job is.

Firstly

Linking Words

, doing the

community

Use synonyms

worker without pay might teach young

adult

Fix the agreement mistake

adults

show examples

about sharing and caring but it would be better if they earn what they have

did

Change the verb form

done

show examples

. Some rewards can teach them to know how to manage money as well.

Furthermore

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

might be the opportunity for them to find their pathway about what to do in the future

such

Linking Words

as social worker, teacher or career that be relevant.

Secondly

Linking Words

, as I mentioned earlier, everybody

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

to be paid when it is working. Even it is

community

Use synonyms

work

Use synonyms

or charity stuff, there

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

a lot of

cost

Change to a plural noun

costs

show examples

that has

devoted

Add a missing verb

been devoted

show examples

.

For instance

Linking Words

, they need to give their time

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

taking care of children with special needs, elders, disabilities or they have

Fix the infinitive

to spend

show examples

spend

Change the verb form

spent

show examples

their time to study about working

method

Fix the agreement mistake

methods

show examples

carefully. Obviously, there are

Add an article

an expense

show examples

expense

Fix the agreement mistake

expenses

show examples

for

traveling

Change the spelling

travelling

show examples

to the workplace. In conclusion, teenagers who do

community

Use synonyms

work

Use synonyms

without money returns might get benefits in some way but they can do

this

Linking Words

kind of

work

Use synonyms

with the reward and still be heartwarming. In the future, the school should provide some extra points for them and it might encourage them to be interested in social

work

Use synonyms

and would love to help people more.