Some people feel that social media encourages antisocial behaviour, such as bullying and cheating, while others disagree that this is the case. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals argue that social

media

encourages antisocial behaviour

such

as bullying and fraudulence

due to

the widespread influence they exert upon people,

while

others believe that there are more reputable advantages gained through these platforms which are very informative.

However

, I believe that the pros of social

media

far outweigh the cons. In

this

essay, I will elucidate both perspectives and elaborate on why social

media

is so important in every aspect of our lives. It is irrefutable that

the

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television, radio and

internet

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the internet

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propagate various news and programs which can have major implications in shaping the way we think or behave. Movies especially which are addictive in a way can negatively affect the actions of growing teenagers and children

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when they portray criminals as heroes or when a felon gets away easily with his activities despite the continuous conning and bullying of others.

For example

, in the

movie

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" The Tinder Swindler" and "The Puppet Master", women

were

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persistently bullied and cheated and the villain often gets away with his actions until the very

last

moment which is usually several years until justice

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been done.

Nevertheless

, in the current era of globalisation, we cannot ignore the fundamental values of social

media

in educating people and communicating.

For example

, society does not need to perform tedious tasks

such

as travelling or posting letters anymore

due to

the benefit of the internet.

On the other hand

, working at home and homeschooling

also

become possible.

Secondly

, advertising

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far more convenient and the public can perform online shopping easily which saves both time and money. In conclusion,

although

social

media

can mend people in a negative way

according to

the nature of the content it displays, we cannot ignore their potential

in developing

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human minds towards a more progressive and empowering direction

as well as

their important roles in our lives today.