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Band 6

You don’t need a teacher to learn English. All you need are a dictionary and a grammar book. Do you agree with this? If not give reasons. If you agree give reasons.

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Some people believe that for learning
English
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 only a
grammar
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 book and a dictionary are necessary and there is no need
of
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 a teacher to learn the
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 in question. I disagree with
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 statement completely, as no
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 in the world could be learnt without someone's assistance.
To begin
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 with, the technical
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 of
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grammar
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 cannot be understood properly if there is no teacher to explain them by giving practical examples. What I mean to say is, a
grammar
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 book would only serve the purpose by giving definitions and
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, they are hard to be understood well without a
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 trainer's help. Most
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 trainers,
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, make their students do activities of different sorts to embed the
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rules
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 in their subconscious mind perfectly, which I believe a
grammar
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 book could sparsely achieve. While if we talk about a dictionary, it could only be helpful in giving us the meanings of the
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 intended to be known but it does not prove to be much beneficial when it comes to building
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a vocabulary
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 of a certain
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.
That is
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words
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 can be remembered better if they are demonstrated to us by someone.
Words
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 related to certain situations or topics could only
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learnt
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 when students are put into different circumstances by a
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, for learning
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 of
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English
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language
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, there would be the necessity of a teacher. In conclusion, for learning
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rules
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 and new
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language
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 or any dialect for that matter, a trainer is needed.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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