The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph indicates information about the evolution of electrical

appliances

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ownership,

as well as

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the period of time which have used for doing house works in one country between 1920 and 2019 .

It is clear that

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the percentage of

households

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household

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devices profit exchanged positively comparing 1920

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2019. The highest point of using

is belonged

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belongs

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Refrigerator

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the Refrigerator

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and Vacuum cleaner with the same results of 100%. ,

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However

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the level of hours for doing house works

resemblances

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with

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apply

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low results coming to 2019. In 1920 the

quantity

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number

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of users of washing

machine

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machines

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was in the lowest part, where the hours of house works had

the

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blossoming percentage

such

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60%. ,

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Moreover

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the process of raising of results of the

Refrigator

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refrigerator

and

Vacumcleaner

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Vacuum cleaner

made

similarly

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even without any differences in data.

As well as

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the time kept

the

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similar percentage in raising in years from 1960 to 2019

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Single idea per paragraph

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Topic Vocabulary:

household appliances
time-efficient
labour-saving devices
technological innovations
ownership rate
housework chores
domestic workload
automation
advancements
trend analysis
societal shifts
economic impact
durability
lifespan of appliances
maintenance
historical comparison
time allocation
drudgery reduction
energy consumption
disruption in trends

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