The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates information about the evolution of electrical
appliances
ownership, Change the noun form
appliance
as well as
the period of time which have used for doing house works in one country between 1920 and 2019 . It is clear that
the percentage of households
devices profit exchanged positively comparing 1920 Change the noun form
household
with
2019. The highest point of using Change preposition
to
is belonged
to Change to the active voice
belongs
has belonged
Refrigerator
and Vacuum cleaner with the same results of 100%. ,Correct article usage
the Refrigerator
However
the level of hours for doing house works Add a comma
,However
resemblances
Replace the word
resembles
with
low results coming to 2019.
In 1920 the Change preposition
apply
quantity
of users of washing Change the quantifier
number
machine
was in the lowest part, where the hours of house works had Fix the agreement mistake
machines
the
blossoming percentage Correct article usage
a
such
60%. ,Moreover
the process of raising of results of the Add a comma
,Moreover
Refrigator
and Correct your spelling
refrigerator
Vacumcleaner
made Correct your spelling
Vacuum cleaner
similarly
even without any differences in data. As well as
the time kept the
similar percentage in raising in years from 1960 to 2019Correct article usage
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