Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

There are tremendously controversial heating a debate on

women

. Whilst the former believe that

females

should play the same

role

as men in a national

police

force or

army

, the latter think that

women

are unsuitable for these types of jobs. While the

second

is valid to some extent, I would contend that the

first

is better. Without a shadow of a doubt,

females

play an equally important

role

as

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a male

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male

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males

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in both

national

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the national

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police

and

army

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the army

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. For the time being, people are settled in the world based on technology so the concern about the qualifications of gender is not necessary.

Moreover

, a

police woman

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or a soldier woman can be equipped with a wide range of top-notch devices

such

as walkie-talkie, pistol gun,.....that can help the

women

to easily train becoming professional

police

to capture offenders like men.

For example

, if the female

police

are assigned the

role

of taking prisoners, they will make more decisive decisions than

male

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and

also

have an effective method of arresting crimes with

the

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high-tech devices nowadays.

Hence

, the

role

of

females

will contribute to the success of

police

forces and military forces like males. While the former

are

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widely acknowledged, there is a variety of

opinion

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that

women

are not proper for

police

and

army

occupations. Undeniable that

females

are more vulnerable than men, especially in physical health conditions.

However

,

instead

of letting

women

take the responsibility for heavy lifting in the military, they can show their potential in some positions like nurses or doctors in the

army

.

For example

, in wars, there are plenty of female nurses and doctors who heal the soldiers in time, help them rehabilitate faster and

also

save their life.

Thus

, the significant

role

of

women

should not be judged through their physical appearance, just by their contributions. To sum up,

women

are of

essence

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in the country's

police

and

army

and

also

there is no difference in gender between

females

and males in both mentioned elements.