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Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in many subcontinental countries. What do you think are the reasons behind this?

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The chart illustrates information about how two solar panels work to give energy for general use. Overall, the
sun
 is the main source of energy for both solar panels.
Also
, the
heat
water
panel
 has a pipe to carry
water
 while the one for
air
 heating has nothing inside.
First
, for the solar
panel
 to
heat
air
, the
box
 needs a transparent
box
 with equal sides. The
panel
 has two inlets.
Firstly
, the cool
air
 gets inside the transparent
box
 through the
first
 inlet on the left.
Then
 the
sun
 rays
heat
 the
air
 via the clear top, and the
second
 outlet on the right side brings out warm
air
 heated by the
sun
.
Moreover
, for the solar
panel
 to
heat
water
, a similar
box
 to the one used to
heat
water
 is needed. Contrary to the
heat
air
 solar
panel
, the left inlet
this
 time
recieves
Correct your spelling
receives
water
instead
.
Then
 the
sun
 heats the pipe inside the
box
 thereby raising the
water
 temperature which at the end comes out warm.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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