Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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world
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it is
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apparent
that the usage of personal vehicles has been increased
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rapidly
during
last
three decades and
that is
the main reason for the traffic
congeson
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congestion
in major cities all over the world. In my perspective there are many actions
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be taken by authorities in order to demotivate individuals from using personal automobiles. On one hand, it is
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evident
that personal automobile especially, personal car usage is the major reason to the
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traffic
jams in urbanized cities.
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growth of
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the
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number
of automobile purchases should have to be inclined. But the other factor, which
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to
this
issue is less availability of the
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facilities
in public
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transport
transports
.
For instance
less seating, less space,
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uncomfortably
and delaying. Because of
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reasons
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people tend to purchase personal automobiles.
On the other hand
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Governments
have a number of duties and
resposibilities
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responsibilities
to control
this
situation and motivate
citisons
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citizens
to use public transport
system
.
For example
, increase
fascilities
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facilities
, increase the number of passenger vehicles and introduce new regulations.
Moreover
authorized personalities can establish a
system
, which is to monitor transportation vehicles, and for the
passangers
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passengers
to check the schedule.
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they have to improve the
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facilities
available.
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introducing
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economical
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monthly
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rental
sytem
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system
would be a move.
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govenments
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governments
government
should introduce a new tax charging
system
for the
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vehicle
vehicles
which are entering to busy areas. To conclude,
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availability
unavailability
of public
transportstion
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transportation
fascilities
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facilities
have caused to the traffic
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congestion
in urbanized cities.
Govenments
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Governments
can control
this
situation by influencing and motivating
citisons
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citizens
to use public
transpot
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transport
system
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • economic losses
  • public transportation
  • congestion charge
  • carpooling
  • pedestrian-friendly
  • urban planning
  • incentives
  • electric car usage
  • environmental impact
  • dependency on cars
  • fuel wastage
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