Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

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Global warming has been increased rapidly and is becoming a controversial issue. There is a variety of reasons behind the increasing level of global warming. The most presenting cause is human activities.
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and foremost cause is deforestation. In
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modern era, people have become selfish, they do not even take care of the surroundings in which they are living. More and more industries are being developed and new buildings are replacing the forests. Nature is at the expense of making the nations well developed and industrialized. The cutting of
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leads to less rain and more humus which is a primary cause of global warming.
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, the usage of chemicals
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as insecticides, pesticides and harmful gases from vehicles is the reason
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the depletion of the ozone layer which
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results in global warming. Every problem has a solution, to minimise the risks of global warming, stop cutting the
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and afforestation are the viable solutions. If some
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are being cut to meet the construction plans, new
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should be planted to meet the losses.
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land was cleared in the western suburb of Victoria for making a corporate office because that location was suitable for the office. But double the number of
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were grown
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that to meet the plan of afforestation. The risk of chemicals and harmful gases can be alleviated by using organic materials like manure for agriculture and using environmentally friendly gases. In conclusion, global warming is a pressing issue
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being caused by human deeds. In future, the issue can be resolved by taking some initiatives like planting more
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and using eco-friendly products.
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