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More and more students choose to move to other oversea countries to have the higher education. Does the trend bring more benefits than disadvantages? What is your opinion?

#students #move #oversea #countries #education #trend
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In recent times, countless learners opt to travel to faraway places in order to
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 their studies. Does
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 result in more positives than negatives? , I believe the long term advantages of improved service delivery can not be overemphasised.
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 in
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 essay, I will tackle both of these views.
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 of all, whenever
students
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 leave the
country
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 for higher learning elsewhere, they weaken the education system in their
country
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 of origin. To put
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 in perspective, the chances to
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 abroad are only available to the most intelligent
students
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 of a
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 who if they remained there would have added value to the
country
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 and its education system. Take,
for example
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, the current scholarships to
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 overseas that are being offered to
students
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 in Zambia, they are given only to the best and most intelligent at a given period in time.
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 means all the bright
students
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 that the
country
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 depends on, leave to develop another land
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.
On the other hand
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, allowing learners to attain scholarships to
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 abroad, has a long term impact of introducing new ideas that have been acquired from a faraway place.
In other words
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,
students
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 who
study
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 abroad bring with them the newest methods of improving service delivery to a nation.
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, an individual who attains a degree in medicine from abroad brings with him the latest way of treating illnesses to a
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 unlike what he could have had he stayed behind. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my statement that the long term influence of the
students
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 who
study
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 from faraway places results in new methods of doing things. Going forward,
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 should be allowed for all
students
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.
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