Some people give more importance to artists ( painters, writers, musicians) in the current age of rapidly developing technology and science. What do you think? Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?

art in many cases, with the development of

technology

, has become the fundamental source of income for

artists

and the majority of people praise them as their idols, whereas scientists do not have obtained any attention as

artists

do so. I completely agree with the idea of people these days seems to enjoy more

arts

than current expanding

technology

. without a doubt, more scientists and

technophile

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have a great advantage to using their potential with the advancement of

technology

, making

public's

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lives easier than we used to,

for example

, we used to participate in offline concerts, whereas we can just enjoy art through the internet.

however

, it does not mean that most

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change their way to enjoy the

arts

, they believe that in order to contribute to

artists

, they need to buy the physical one, not the digital one. the reason behind

this

is perhaps the owners that have the platforms, most

artists

use to promote their

arts

, charge plenty of money to

artists

that publish their

arts

on their platform. some may argue that painter has a bad influence on pupils in the context of promoting their

arts

,

however

not all of them has

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attitude, in fact, most

of

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artists

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the artists

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promote their culture, religion, ethnicity through

arts

, and they become more productive and obtain a great engagement with the advancement of the internet,

therefore

, society

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to watch more artisan than scientist since there is a sense of belonging that connects the artist to their audience and they do love to interact with

artists

( painters, writers, musicians). in conclusion,

although

technology

is essential for our life,

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tend to prefer

arts

due to sharing the same feelings with the artist and promoting their culture