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In some cultures, the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#cultures #age #youth
Many cultures consider
ancestory
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ancestors
ancestry
 greater than
youth
 based on their traditions. Both old age and the early parts of
life
 are vital in building and securing a stable and welcoming future for everyone. The core values of every culture stem from
respectfullness
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respectfulness
 and politeness to the older
generating
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,
thus
 creating an emphasis on caring for
people
 that are in need of any help. The way
people
 treat old
people
 is
prevelant
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prevalent
 in the culture of my country,
thus
 they are considered wise and experienced, that the
youth
 can benefit from by learning the mistakes and
life
 choices they made. They have paved the way for the upcoming generation through hardship and
hardwork
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hard work
 throughout their
life
. Even though society sometimes undermines how essential the roots of admiring the elderly are,
people
 still
tries
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 to help them as much as they can in every way possible,
such
 as building recreational
centers
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 to improve the quality of
life
 for the older ages.
On the other
hand
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 youngsters culturally are seen as the keepers of the pedigree brought to them by their ancestors,
hence
 why some
tradition
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traditions
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 focus on providing steady
grouth
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growth
 for the
youth
 in the hopes
of
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that later they will remember and repay
people
 that have helped along their journey. I think it's just the cycle of
life
 that traditions inflicted on us maintaining a balance between the two age groups. To sum up, in my opinion, both
youth
 and old age complete
eachother
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each other
,
although
 different cultures have particular
standarts
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standards
 for both groups, they still do wonders together.
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