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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Nowadays,
residents
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 tend to consume
food
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 and beverage
products
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 that contain high levels of sugar.
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,
this
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behaviour
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 results in many health troubles of
people
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.
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, some
people
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 believe that sugary
products
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 should be made at a higher
price
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 to help them eat less sugar. In the following paragraphs, the reasons why I disagree with
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 issue will be discussed.
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 with, making sugary
products
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 more expensive could be better for
residents
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’ health.
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, when the authorities raise the
price
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 of sugary
products
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,
people
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 will change their
behaviour
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 of consuming
food
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 and drink. To illustrate, recent research on
food
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behaviour
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 in one country found that the statistic of eating sugary
products
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 is decreasing due to the higher
price
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, compared to the past.
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,
this
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 solution will encourage some
people
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 to avoid eating unhealthy
food
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.
On the other hand
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, I strongly disagree with
this
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 idea because
this
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 solution is not the only way, affecting most
residents
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 to eat less sugary goods.
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 of all, citizens with high income can
also
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 buy
food
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 at a higher
price
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 because they are affordable.
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, there are other ways to solve
this
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 problem with the collaboration of governments.
For instance
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, the authorities can raise awareness of consuming unhealthy
food
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 by providing information on the disadvantages of
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behaviour
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.
Furthermore
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, encouraging
residents
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 to do more exercise will be better than raising the
price
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 of sugary
products
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. In conclusion, even though there are some advantages of making sugary
products
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 more expensive to help
people
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 consume less sugar, I believe that there are other ways to solve
this
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 problem by raising awareness of eating unhealthy
food
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 and encouraging
residents
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 to do more exercise.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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