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Percentage of UK people who consumed the daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006, and 2010.

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The given bar graph depicts the information about the number of
fruits
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vegetables
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 suggested being consumed by the English masses It can be clearly seen that in 2002 the utilization of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 by the males of the united kingdom is double as compared to
consumption
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 by children that was 22%. As well as
consumption
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 by females was recorded as 25% which was 3% more than males.
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, it is evident that the usage of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 by the young ones, men and women was 18%, 26%, and 32 % respectively in 2006. Moving
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, in 2010 it was noticed that a negligible difference of 2% was seen in the
consumption
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 of males and females that the former was recorded as 24% and the latter was 26%. Overall, it can be concluded that the maximum
consumption
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 of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 was by women and the minimum was by children
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Daily recommended amount
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Consumption levels
  • Public health campaigns
  • 5-a-day campaign
  • Dietary trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Awareness of health issues
  • Availability and variety
  • Supermarkets
  • Economic recession impacts
  • Societal norms
  • Dietary patterns
  • Taxation and subsidies
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