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In their advertising, businnesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Based on current markets, it is pretty obvious that companies are mainly focusing on advertising the new features of their products and their
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 with previous models. I, personally, believe that
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 aware of all of the aspects of
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 mankind has solved
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 problems in a different way than other species
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 mind and trying to think of an innovative idea. It is clear that using
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 method has brought us where we are today and has made life much easier by far. Since new features of a product are somehow a result of innovative thinking, in my opinion, they should be appreciated and developed into a helpful feature of a product. If we consider the automobile industry as an example, we can observe that one of the main motivations for engineers has been adding a newer option or system to cars and
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 generation by generation.
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 newer products tend to become more advantageous
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 to their previous models, manufacturers must consider not to go far beyond the line and sacrifice quality to offer a new item to the market.The new auto-drive system of Tesla Motors’ cars can be a sufficient example
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 that. Despite the fact that their new system can be helpful to some drivers, it has some major issues and bugs that happen sometimes which endanger the passengers’ safety.The company seems to have focused more on offering new features rather than developing them. In conclusion, I admit that new ideas can be very sufficient and the fact that companies are focusing on them and their advertisement, can be a hopeful thing.
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