Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Issues about
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is a popular topic in debates of scientists, environmentalists or even
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ordinary people. I strongly disagree with the idea that we have to search for methods in order to adapt to
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, I believe that averting
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provides numerous benefits in the long run,
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as economic development and improvements of public
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. Actions should be taken in order to avoid the devastating effects of
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which in turn contributes to a country’s economic development.
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, most countries nowadays use renewable or clean
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by replacing fossils as a main source of
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in manufacturing industries and in communities as well.
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renewable
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does not only stop the devastating effects of
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but
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emerging sector opens up
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the opportunity
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opportunity
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for employment and more investment.
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innovation aids in
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development of a nation.
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, improvements
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public
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apparent once
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to cease
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takes place. Utilizing renewable
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results
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less toxic chemicals which makes
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cleaner air and improved water quality.
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significantly
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rates of illness and may decrease hospitalization of individuals with existing
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conditions
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as asthma or obstructive pulmonary diseases. For that reason, it will strengthen the
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of each
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and will narrow
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the mortally
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mortally
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rate as public
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is way better than it used to be. In conclusion, humans deserve a pleasant place to live
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,
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a stop
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climate
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is more beneficial in many ways than exploring methods in order to consider living with it.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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