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Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion

#people #attention
In today's
world
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 we have faced more commercials day by day. People have different opinions about these commercials,
while
 some have a belief that they are forcing us to buy some things that we
are not actually need
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them
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, others say that they are becoming too normal for us
that
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and that
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 we
are not even see
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 them anymore.
This
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this
 opinion. On the one hand, advertisements have many profits they promote Us new products which are produced in many fields, by
this
 we
aware
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about
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 new products and we have a range of many choices.
Also
, it causes some competition among producers
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which one of them can give a better service to customers.
They
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These
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 are some of the advantages
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advertise
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have.
On the other hand
, some people say that
in
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these days there are too many advertisements in every place
for instance
,
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on
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tv
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TV
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 programs, on billboards, on
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the
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radio and many other places;
Besides
 producers have lied a lot to customers about their products by commercials that customers do not believe them anymore and pass most of the advertisings and do not have any awareness about them. I personally believe that advertising is a necessary thing. But people should not believe everything that may be said
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 them and they should search
by
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they
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their
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 own and make the best decision. In conclusion,
although
 producers may give some information in their advertising that they are not true
but
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it does not cause
to
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them to
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 not pay attention to them at all. Our needs may be found in them.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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