Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion
In today's radio and many other places;
world
we have faced more commercials day by day. People have different opinions about these commercials, Add a comma
world,
while
some have a belief that they are forcing us to buy some things that we are not actually need
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do not actually need
them
, others say that they are becoming too normal for us Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
we Correct word choice
and that
are not even see
them anymore. Change the verb form
do not even see
This
essay will discuss both sides of this
opinion. On the one hand, advertisements have many profits they promote Us new products which are produced in many fields, by this
we aware
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are aware
about
new products and we have a range of many choices. Change preposition
of
Also
, it causes some competition among producers that
which one of them can give a better service to customers. Correct pronoun usage
apply
They
are some of the advantages Correct pronoun usage
These
may
Correct pronoun usage
that may
advertise
have. Verb problem
apply
On the other hand
, some people say that in
these days there are too many advertisements in every place Change preposition
apply
for instance
, in
Change preposition
on
tv
programs, on billboards, onCorrect your spelling
TV
Correct article usage
the
Besides
producers have lied a lot to customers about their products by commercials that customers do not believe them anymore and pass most of the advertisings and do not have any awareness about them. I personally believe that advertising is a necessary thing. But people should not believe everything that may be said in
them and they should search Change preposition
to
by
Change preposition
on
they
own and make the best decision. In conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
their
although
producers may give some information in their advertising that they are not true but
it does not cause Remove the conjunction
apply
to
not pay attention to them at all. Our needs may be found in them.Correct pronoun usage
them to
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion