Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion

In today's

world

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world,

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we have faced more commercials day by day. People have different opinions about these commercials,

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some have a belief that they are forcing us to buy some things that we

are not actually need

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do not actually need

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them

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, others say that they are becoming too normal for us

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and that

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we

are not even see

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do not even see

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them anymore.

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essay will discuss both sides of

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opinion. On the one hand, advertisements have many profits they promote Us new products which are produced in many fields, by

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we

aware

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about

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of

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new products and we have a range of many choices.

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, it causes some competition among producers

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which one of them can give a better service to customers.

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are some of the advantages

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that may

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advertise

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have.

On the other hand

, some people say that

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apply

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these days there are too many advertisements in every place

for instance

,

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on

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tv

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TV

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programs, on billboards, on

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the

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radio and many other places;

Besides

producers have lied a lot to customers about their products by commercials that customers do not believe them anymore and pass most of the advertisings and do not have any awareness about them. I personally believe that advertising is a necessary thing. But people should not believe everything that may be said

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to

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them and they should search

by

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they

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their

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own and make the best decision. In conclusion,

although

producers may give some information in their advertising that they are not true

but

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it does not cause

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them to

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not pay attention to them at all. Our needs may be found in them.