You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Robert, My name is Joe. Recently I enjoyed your concert which was held at the city college playground on May 5th. When I was

listening

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your voice during that concert. I wished to

listen

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your voice for a long duration. Apart from that your music provides me with a mental piece

that is

very essential in

this

fast-paced life. After reached to my residence, I started following you on Spotify so I will receive the notification as you launch any new song. I would like to inform you that I am

also

a local singer in my town. At some local festivals, I am entertaining the residents of the town by singing. Recently I received an appreciation from our city's mayor for the outstanding and overwhelming performance at the republic day celebration. To be honest, I am lacking in pop music.

This

highlights me as inferior as compared to my counterparts. If you are going to organise a workshop on pop music let me know. So I will gain knowledge related to

this

. An open line of communication in

this

matter will be greatly helping out. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Joe

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194 words

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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stellar performance
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