You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Robert, My name is Joe. Recently I enjoyed your concert which was held at the city college playground on May 5th. When I was

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your voice during that concert. I wished to

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your voice for a long duration. Apart from that your music provides me with a mental piece

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fast-paced life. After reached to my residence, I started following you on Spotify so I will receive the notification as you launch any new song. I would like to inform you that I am

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a local singer in my town. At some local festivals, I am entertaining the residents of the town by singing. Recently I received an appreciation from our city's mayor for the outstanding and overwhelming performance at the republic day celebration. To be honest, I am lacking in pop music.

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highlights me as inferior as compared to my counterparts. If you are going to organise a workshop on pop music let me know. So I will gain knowledge related to

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. An open line of communication in

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matter will be greatly helping out. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Joe

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

194 words

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stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
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collaboration
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aspiring musician
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