You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Robert, My name is Joe. Recently I enjoyed your concert which was held at the city college playground on May 5th. When I was
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your voice during that concert. I wished to
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your voice for a long duration. Apart from that your music provides me with a mental piece
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fast-paced life. After reached to my residence, I started following you on Spotify so I will receive the notification as you launch any new song. I would like to inform you that I am
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a local singer in my town. At some local festivals, I am entertaining the residents of the town by singing. Recently I received an appreciation from our city's mayor for the outstanding and overwhelming performance at the republic day celebration. To be honest, I am lacking in pop music.
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highlights me as inferior as compared to my counterparts. If you are going to organise a workshop on pop music let me know. So I will gain knowledge related to
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matter will be greatly helping out. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Joe
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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