Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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modern age. There is a huge debate among people that all degrees are focusing on the

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are teaching students facts rather than providing them

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more attention. There are several reasons why tutors do not convey any

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a stage where AI could do most of the

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. In fact, many factories, software, and airports are using AI in their

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are putting more weight on fact-based

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would prefer to teach facts not skill, and one of them is economical.

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, most of these schools have been generating a considerable amount of money from these

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is nearly $100,000. In conclusion, there was a discussion between individuals that

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era became more of

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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