Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate on how to deal with the perpetrators. While some claim on putting behind the bars, the opposite makes a statement on tuition training courses. Meanwhile,

education

is valid to some extent, I would contend that sending criminals to prison is better . It is undeniable that educational training plays a paramount significant role in coping with

law breakers

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. It can be applied to the convicts who plead guilty

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crime

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the crime

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for the

first

time. There are a wealth of people

commiting

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committing

the crimes due to the seduction from other convicts or the lack of moral lessons from their parents.

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, children who take part in lawbreaking action should receive

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vocation training to have a chance to reintegrate

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the community.

Therefore

,

education

and job training are of

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.

Although

providing

education

and jobs are widely acknowledged,

imprisonment

is necessary for certain types of criminals . Because it is one of the most reasonable tactics to prevent potential crimes caused by those offenders.

For example

, when

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criminals commit

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serious crimes

such

as murder or kidnapper,

imprisonment

is indispensable for them because they must suffer the punishment for what they create.

Moreover

,

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are some lawbreakers who repeat their offending

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over and over,

education

and job training are almost ineffective to them.

As a result

, they are likely to be afraid of

this

and it acts as a deterrent so that they may not commit the crime in the future.

Hence

,

imprisonment

is prioritized. In conclusion, both

education

and

imprisonment

are effective methods to address the prisoners. Depending on the seriousness of

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opt for the optimal sentence.