Nowadays, people believe that government should invest tax-payer's money in healthcare , others believe that money should be use in other areas . Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
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important
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an important
factor
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to factor
economic
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the economic
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At
present
time , some Add an article
the present
people
said that government
should spend their income in healthcare sectors, some individuals said that government
should be give
their Change the verb form
be given
be giving
money
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a different
This both
views will Correct pronoun usage
Both
justified
in Change the verb form
be justified
next
paragraph.
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the next
To begin
with,If government
should spend their money
on healthcare so, people
can get better medical treatment . Hospital
, equipment , new technologies should Fix the agreement mistake
Hospitals
be improve
so that, Change the verb form
be improved
docters
can easily recover their patient. Correct your spelling
doctors
For example
, government
should give their Add an article
the government
money
on public care section so, hospitals can know new
technology and buy some new foreign equipment , Add an article
the new
result
of Add an article
the result
a result
this
,the
can treat their patient very well and added that cancer is one big Correct your spelling
they
diseases
but in some Change to a singular noun
disease
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situations
situation
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,situation
government
should invest their amount on medical people
can treat own big diseases.
On the other hand
, government
should give their Add an article
the government
money
on
different types of Change preposition
to
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the area
area
it involves transportation, infrastructure, education and so on. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Government
give their fund on
transportation it is better for Change preposition
for
people
. Example
of Change preposition
For example
this
, politics spent their investment on poor
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the poor
road
so that road Fix the agreement mistake
roads
condition
should Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
be grow
and Change the verb form
be growing
be grown
people
can get more modern road
and other Fix the agreement mistake
roads
think
is that Correct your spelling
thing
,
traffic and accident should be decline. If Remove the comma
apply
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an accident
accident
should be Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
decline
, Add an article
a decline
the decline
people
can travel without any fear.
In conclusion, politics should spend their fund on health services so, people
can get better
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the better
facility
Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
of
medical treatment and other Change preposition
for
people
think that the
should spend their income on Correct your spelling
they
other different sector
it involves transportation , education , infrastructure and so on . In my opinion, Change the wording
another different sector
other different sectors
government
should give their income on health services it is good for Add an article
the government
healthy
country.Add an article
a healthy
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