The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 milion vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms od transport shoukd be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, the whole world is dependent on cars. These vehicles have now become our necessity. They are extremely helpful in daily activities or
for instance
travelling. More and more people
want to have a driving license but have you ever thought how
it influences Change preposition
about how
on
the environment or Change preposition
apply
another alternatives
than these vehicles?
There is no doubt that cars are one of the most comfortable Replace the adjective
another alternative
other alternatives
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
transport
. The society
enjoys Correct article usage
Society
to be
Change the verb form
being
independet
and have own comfort zone. Correct your spelling
independent
For instance
, my car
is my comman
centre and I couldn't imagine my life without it. Correct your spelling
command
common
Furthermore
, I work extremely far away from home, so I definitely do not miss times when Ii
had to go to work by public Correct your spelling
I
transport
and woke up earlier. Plenty of people
are in the same situation as me, so in this
case
having a Add a comma
,case
car
is the best solution.
On the other hand
, I am into ecology and I am aware how our
world will look like in the future if we do not cut off using vehicles. Correct pronoun usage
what our
For instance
, I am keen on riding a bike, it is great
opportunity if we do not have time to do some sports. It helps us stay healthy and in great condition. I have always encouraged my friends and family to Add an article
a great
use
this
type of transport
. I consider that the goverment
should focus on that and show Correct your spelling
government
people
that it is not necessary to use
a car
all the time.
Moreover
, in these times we have a lot of alternative forms of transport
, such
as electronic scooters. From my point of view, everybody should try this
at least once, and firsthand
experience with that. Add a missing verb
have firsthand
Besides
, now many people
have problems with overweight
, so another wonderful alternative is simply walking. Social media should cooperate with international laws and encouraged Add a missing verb
being overweight
people
to do it by for example
campaigns.
To sum up, I would like to say that car
ownership and use
should be controlled because many people
use
a car
situation which does not make sense. Even if people
think that alternative forms of transport
are not their cup of tea, they ought to be encouraged.Submitted by Liwia
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