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Some people believe it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to share freely. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The right to
access
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information
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 belongs to everyone. Nowadays,
people
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 are divided in their opinion regarding free
access
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 to business, academic and science-related
information
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. In my opinion,
access
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 to similar
information
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 should not be free as there is a need to protect both the intellectual and material rights of its original owners. On the one hand, free
access
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 to
information
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 will help experts build on existing knowledge and resources to cure
people
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 from life-saving diseases. Other businesses could use existing business insights to optimize their services and products.
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, many underdeveloped countries lack funding to invest in critical sectors
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 as healthcare, energy and industrial development.
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, with free
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 to medical
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, doctors in African countries can apply cutting-edge
research
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 to cure infectious diseases like malaria that kill millions of
people
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 every year.
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, similar
research
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 is not easy to come up with.
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, many scientists and researchers
work
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 under abnormal conditions and others suffer from piracy and unauthorized
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 to their
work
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.
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,
people
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 working in
research
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 and development devote their lives to coming up with new ideas and developing accumulated knowledge whereas many struggles to attract interested donors and funding organizations.
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, a medical researcher could spend years applying for government grants to publish his academic papers or get media coverage for his
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.
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, those researchers need to continue their
work
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 and stay focused and motivated. In conclusion, without the protection of ideas, businesses and individuals would not reap the benefits of their
work
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 and would focus less on
research
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 and development.
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,
further
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 international cooperation is required to support critical sectors and safe lives in underserved communities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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