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The floor plans describe the information about the at present home

ans

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and

renoavtions

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renovations

for the upcoming years. Looking from an overall perspective, in the future plan of homes' interior will be renovated with a new ensuite

bathroom

and

the

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social area in the kitchen. At present the home contains outside of the house has

garden

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a garden

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on the top and left side is the

study

bedroom

, the

bottom

of the left outside has entrance through a hall, following to the

bathroom

and top of the right

corner

living

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the living

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room, right

corner

study

bedroom

. The kitchen is located

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the

bottom

of the

study

bedroom

to another

study

bedroom

is located. In terms of future plans, the hall size will be diminished and the

ensuit

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ensuite

bathroom

will

build

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built

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in the hall place.

Similarly

, the

bathroom

size

wil

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will

reduce and the top of the left

corner

living room will be replaced by the

study

bedroom

and, following to the left

corner

study

bedroom

size will be minimized. The kitchen will share the social area,

bottom

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the bottom

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of the

study

bedroom

will

be remained

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remain

have remained

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. The garden will replace by the parking

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the

bottom

of the house and outside of the left

side

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,side

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study

bedroom

will be built. The entrance will not be changed.

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Summerise the information by selecting and reporting

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that it is more important to focus on the future rather than the present. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss, including examples from your own knowledge and experience.

nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. what are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why is this? Do you think the government should spend more money supporting the local film industry?