In most countries today the number of plant and animal species are decreasing what causing this situation?

Currently,there is much discussion with regard to
decline
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of
plant
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plants
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and
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animals
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. It is argued that
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the most
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countries
are
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dropping
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human
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use a
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which the product made from
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animals
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so that will
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the natural and the point in
this
situation is the
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waste
water which is the
people
release
on the river. Nowadays, some
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companies still focus on
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sales but
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not concern
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plant
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plants
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and
animal
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are dowing from the manufactory.
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,most population have a
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campaign
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campaigns
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which protect
animals
but
others group
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other groups
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still support
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brands
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which made
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bags from
leather
animals
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popular
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bags from
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animals
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people
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especially
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woman who always support
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luxury
brand
and interesting more than the effect to natural.
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,the waste is key
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this
problem which the
people
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it on the river.
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the
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in the canal ,particular in Bangkok. When the
people
use a boat transport will see the water has the black
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because everyone
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near the canal usually
release
the
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trash
which is reason to the wastewater which effect to the animal and
plant
on
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place. In conclusion, there
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a
lot
of
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which are impact on plants and
animals
are decreasing
such
as the
brand
still
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on
made
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the goods from
leather
animals
and the
people
still
release
the waste to the river.
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