Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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type
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types
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of
people
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of attempting to do something which is unfamiliar to them while others run their
life
, reversing renovation. The nature of
people
, who are keen on doing experiments
such
as travelling around the world or tasting new types of food, is considered more flexible and positive
comparing
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with livers who used to live commonly.
Moreover
, creative
people
are capable to deal with any troubles when they face
it
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them
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. They can get in touch with strangers even without confusing or being shy. The main reason is the gained experiences during their
life
.
For instance
,
People
who test themselves in climbing on the mountains and reaching it can make disappear their feeling of fear and boost
feeling
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the feeling
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of bravery.
On the other hand
, the desire of
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do something new gives to brain a chance to learn more things
which
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related
with
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it’s
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surrounding. Because
,
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the creature has a chance to get
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information and find out
world
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from another site.
Finally
, Humanity
become
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as
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a
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powerfull
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powerful
and more stable to
challenging
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challenge
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with the help of experiences which have gained before. If it’s come to the
people
who prefer just regretting doing unfamiliar activities, they are described as introverts. Introverts actually like being alone and
live
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without news and
afraid
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are afraid
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of
colorful
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life
.
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addition
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they can not notice that their body needs to be regenerated.
Body
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becomes tired and loose quality
such
as
humor
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and satisfaction of
life
by making the same action in daily routine. According to
psychologist’s
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statement, it is mentioned that as our health is associated with our mood, mood should be
fulled
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with
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energetic actions which are not alike to others. As only our mood can give us strength and provide our health with a better condition. To sum up
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about
people
’s preferences on actions, it’s claimed that the livers who are on the site of doing vicarious bearings are likely to be
more lucky
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luckier
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in their
life
such
as achieving goals easily in a fast speed or get closer with any strangers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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