The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables provide information about
sales
of two fairtrade-labbelled
products, coffee and Correct your spelling
fairtrade-labelled
bananas
in 5 European countries
, in 1999 and 2004.Owing to data, sales
are presented in millions
of euros
.
It is clearly seen from the data that between
all Change preposition
among
european
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European
countries
, UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
are presented such
as the most important buyers of coffee and banana, which Correct quantifier usage
apply
purchase
significantly increased
between 1999 and 2004.
To start with coffee, in 1999 there were slight variations in Wrong verb form
increasing
sales
amongst five countries
. The most noticeable sales
were done to Switzeraland
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Switzerland
valuated
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evaluated
in
3 Change preposition
at
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
. Regarding to
2004, Remove the preposition
apply
sales
increased slightly in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Whereas
,
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apply
the
commerce Correct article usage
apply
were
doubled in Change the verb form
was
Switzerland
, 6 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
comparing
to 3 Wrong verb form
compared
millions
in 1999 and skyrocketed in Change to singular
million
UK
, 18 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
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million
euros
more than in 1999.
In turn to bananas
, in 1999 there were slight fluctuations in sales
between UK
, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark. Most remarkable was Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
, the principal buyer of bananas
, which purchase
were Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
valueted
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evaluated
valued
in
15M. In 2004, some Change preposition
at
countries
such
as Sweden and Denmark suffered little
decrease in Add an article
a little
banana’s
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banana
purchase
. Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
On the other hand
, countries
like Switzerland
, UK
and Belgium Correct article usage
the UK
rised
their Correct your spelling
raised
purchase
in 32M, 4,5M and 3,4M of euros
respectively. Being the
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apply
Switzerland
the most important in consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
bananas
both
years.
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in both
To sum up
, in 1999 Switzerland
was the major consumer of both products. However
, in 2004 UK
was the most important Correct article usage
the UK
coffee’s
client and Change noun form
coffee
Switzerland
in Bananas
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