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Animal habitats have been destroyed, and some animal species have become endangered. WY does this happen? What can be done to protect endangered animals?

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Animals
 and humans have been living together for a while year.
People
 are getting used to living
livestock
 during their life that they can look after to them as their child nowadays. In the past. Humans hunted
animals
 for food and clothing because ancient
people
 think
that is
 the only way to survive because they occasionally had been to use and now we do think about ourselves more. In my view, the trees are cutting off
instead
 of constructing new skyscrapers. These things are only for
people
 comfortable and together with it is harmful to
livestock
.
Thus
, we are dropping gradually animal homes. If we continue to decline the forest, we might lose priceless
livestock
 because we can count with our fingers their number. In my point of view, we need to make peace and remarkably condition to them. We have another choice but it contains a few percentages. We need to set up a fake place for their life. It likes a cage. Some
people
 hunt them and
then
 will sell their skin. I think
that is
 a totally wrong method to find more money. In my experience, I have read that there are fewer types of
livestock
 that they survive in the Ocean and these are whales and humans called
animals
 named a tigger that lives in the forest. I believe we got a protect them because we have to youngest
animals
 ,especially generations. I completely agree with
this
 statement that government has to protect
livestock
 because if they do not live, we will not hope young generation on top of that we can try to multiple amounts of
animals
 as much as possible.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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