Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

There are many types of
people
in the world. Some of them strive for new
things
, while the rest prefer to do what they are used to. In my opinion, it is better to do new
thing
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such
as to visit new places and to eat new foods In my view,
to try
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new
things
is better than
get
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getting
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used to
same
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the same
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things
. Because nowadays there are a lot of new
things
such
as places, gadgets, foods and others.
That is
why
people
should aim
new
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things
. So their worldview and thinking will improve and they will be
modern
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than others. To try new
things
may change
people
's character and style. Because if
people
attempt new
things
, they will have
broad
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outlook. On
the
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another
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hand
to get
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used to is good too.
Beacuse
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Because
if
people
do accustomed
things
, they live easy.
That is
why
to do
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habituated
things
is
normal
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a normal
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situation for
people
. The reason
of
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most
people
prefer to get used to
familiar
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with
things
, they do not like to create or strive
new
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things
. They love to do their accustomed
things
. In conclusion, to try new
things
is better than to get used to similar
things
. Because I think
people
must devise and try new
things
. So the world
continue
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to develop.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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