Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more environmental problems.

Some argue that the primary environmental issue of our time is that specific species of
animals
and
plants
are disappearing. Others consider that there are many other environmental issues.
This
essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite that the extinction of some
animals
and
plants
affects the cycle of
life
, global warming is the main problem that humans are facing. It is often argued that the cycle of
life
is impacted by the lack of some
plants
and animal species because every stage of
this
natural process is essential. When a part of the cycle of
life
disappears, the other stages are affected, and the natural process is altered.
For example
, in Venezuela some wild
animals
have disappeared,
such
as a snake named “Cascabel”, and as
,result
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there is an overpopulation of rodents that they consumed and are putting at risk human
life
at the same time.
However
, global warming is a problem
that is
affecting the earth. Global warming is a problem that affects
animals
,
plants
and humans’
life
and needs urgent action because the consequences of these problems can be a catastrophe. That means that the North and South pole
are
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melting.
Furthermore
, the sea levels are increasing more and more and, there are possibilities of flooding in many places.
For example
, in Colombia is expected to sea level will increase by 20 % in the future and in some coastal cities,
such
as Barranquilla, will not exist. For
this
reason, I believe that concerns about global warming are real. In conclusion, despite the fear that some
plants
and
animals
have extinct,
this
essay believes that global warming is the primary issue that needs our attention and requests urgent action.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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