Write a letter to your manager telling him about how sitting for long hours for your work has affected your health. In your letter you should mention; 1. What health problems are you facing. 2. Give suggestions as to about what changes can be brought about to reduce the health risks on you and on your colleagues. 3. How will these changes be beneficial to the company when it comes to future employees.
Dear Manager,
My name is Joe. I am working as a software engineer in our firm for the
last
two years. The reason for writing this
letter is to narrate the issues while doing the job on a daily basis.
As you are already aware that from the last
three months workload has been at the
peak. In order to maintain the deadline of the Change the word
its
projects
I need to seat on a chair for more than 10 hours a day. Add a comma
,projects
This
action leads to severe back pain. Due to this
, in the previous week
I approached one doctor Add a comma
,week
then
he suggested I perform some yoga
activities as a daily routine to mitigate this
.
Hence
I would like to request you that if possible then
kindly hire one yoga
instructor so that all employees including me all workers will take part actively on daily basis especially
in the morning. Even though during high workload schedule we will manage somehow to attend Add the comma(s)
,especially
this
yoga
class.
As everyone is aware that by performing some yoga
on a daily manner, it will definitely lower the back pain issue moreover
it provides relaxation to all the employees and also
increases concentration. Owing to this
workers in our firm able to work smoothly without any hassle.
An open line of communication on this
matter will be greatly helping out. Waiting for your reply.
Regards,
JoeSubmitted by akshay.thakare2804 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite